October 23rd, 2010
I will, of course, be taking advantage of my regular stable of betas, but I'd like a fresh set of eyes for this one. I have an issue with commas and dropping words, but I'm generally pretty solid grammatically, so mostly it would be for tone and logical progression. I sometimes let my enthusiasm override my better judgment when it comes to logic in my stories.
So, if you have any interest in beta-ing about 15K words of Bob Bryar/Adam Lambert RPF porno, let me know!