I really did appreciate your going out of your way to send it to me, and although I hate to admit this, I was pleased to see that it wasn't really all that great of an NC17 fic. Because I'm vain that way. But honestly, the part that bothered me the most was that the plot was just kind of all over the place. And again...issues. People need to deal with Martin's issues. His father is central to every decision he makes, poor bastard, and that needs to be addressed.

I'm never happy with other people's fic, am I? No, that's not true. I'm happy with the fic that the people I like write. Heh.