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ext_1650 ([identity profile] turps33.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] carleton97 2008-06-25 09:07 pm (UTC)

I enjoyed this so much. I especially loved the interaction with the band, the colouring and Gerard and Mikey at the pool. ( that scene delighted me ) I also liked how you dealt with Bob's grief and how overwhelmed he felt. Because suddenly being a full time father would be huge, and he was thrust without warning into the job.

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