Well, first of all, I would have betaed the story if I'd been home when you posted the message asking me to...but I was hanging out with Madame (my friend's mom, who is like a second mom to me). Sorry about that.

But, anyway, I really liked this little story. I think you got Martin down really well - how he'd try to avoid Danny and all that - and Danny too. I can so see him just showing up at Martin's apartment and not giving him a chance to say no. Great job, and extra points for letting them live happily ever after (I'm interpreting the "three years later" statement). Great job, and (once again) sorry I wasn't here to help...not that I think you needed any from reading the story.