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carleton97 ([personal profile] carleton97) wrote2005-05-22 12:15 am

it hurts us, precious...

You! Yes, you!

Your story?

UNREADABLE.

Seriously. I mean, as a concept it was intriguing enough for me to open it, but the execution made me want to open a vein.

Grammar is not just for snobs. Really.

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